school
dreary, difficult
punishing, silencing, working
prison, factory, laboratory, creative space
thinking, encouraging, rewarding
engaging, exciting
school
A diamante poem I wrote as an example for my kids. Thought I'd share.
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22 minutes ago
A very interesting poem Steve.
ReplyDeleteIs it a telling sign that you need a vacation when the negative thoughts came first....?
ReplyDeleteI like it - the symmetry which is lovely to look at as well as to think about and the fact that 'laboratory' comes in the middle. I don't think the Canadian school kids of my acquaintance would relate to 'punishing prison' or even 'factory'. What do you guys think? What did the Korean kids think? gm
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